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Law Practice,
Appellate Practice

Jan. 24, 2020

The 7 deadly sins of legal writing

Don’t let your writing be false, late, noncompliant, unsupported, unpersuasive, unfocused or boring.

Louie H. Castoria

Partner
Kaufman, Dolowich & Voluck LLP

425 California St 21st Fl
San Francisco , CA 94104

Phone: (415) 926-7601

Fax: (415) 926-7601

Email: lcastoria@kdvlaw.com

UC Berkeley Boalt Hall

Louie is a mediator with CourtCall Online Dispute Resolution, a member of the Mediation Society, a mandatory settlement officer with the San Francisco County Superior Court, and an adjunct professor of law at Golden Gate University. He won his first U.S. Supreme Court on July 1, 2021.

Writers can be their own worst enemies.

Writers of poor prose risk being derided, unpublished, and their work involuntary submitted to the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest, which honors, if that is the right word, those who write "atrocious opening sentences to hypothetical bad novels." At 37 words, including a gratuitous detour into a barely relevant side topic, that last sentence may qualify for submission.

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