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Law Practice,
Appellate Practice

Feb. 15, 2023

Shorter is better

Briefs within the current California limits – 14,000 words for principal briefs and 28,000 words for combined briefs in a cross-appeal – are often too long and would be far more effective if shortened.

David M. Axelrad

Partner
Horvitz & Levy LLP

Email: daxelrad@horvitzlevy.com

UC Hastings COL; San Francisco CA

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Admonitions about the importance of brevity in legal writing are legion. And yet, all too often, appellate writing is burdened by "wordiness," defined by some as "trying to convey too much information and covering too many issues." (Federal Judicial Center, Judicial Writing Manual: A Pocket Guide for Judges (2nd ed. 2013) p. 21.)

Years ago, I encountered a set of appellate briefs (on file with the author) that illustrate the problem and he...

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